This is the first draft of my magazine front cover belonging to my overall goal in this media course. This is a music magazine cover and will be altered in order to achieve higher grades. The final product can be seen below.
I apologise that this is the first formal feedback you've been given, I assumed it had been done. Your concept is good but do me a favour...GET RID OF THE SCHOOL UNIFORM! You know the rules, I don't care what you think you are going for, it's obvious and lazy and the exam board would equally think so. Invest in getting people to bring in some costume. Checked shirts, something that looks like it belongs in the music industry...this does not, it's like a business magazine cover. You won't even get a basic score if this image is left the way it is. Sorry for being blunt and direct but it is what it is. You need to listen to what I've been saying since September and your images need to be fit for purpose. There's no point in doing all kinds of interviews and snazzy research and planning if you are being lazy in your construction because it will ultimately leave you with your main mark out of 60 being a 20 and even if your R&P is full marks you will only end up with an E! Think about it and get your mise en scene sorted please.
I apologise that this is the first formal feedback you've been given, I assumed it had been done.
ReplyDeleteYour concept is good but do me a favour...GET RID OF THE SCHOOL UNIFORM! You know the rules, I don't care what you think you are going for, it's obvious and lazy and the exam board would equally think so. Invest in getting people to bring in some costume. Checked shirts, something that looks like it belongs in the music industry...this does not, it's like a business magazine cover. You won't even get a basic score if this image is left the way it is. Sorry for being blunt and direct but it is what it is. You need to listen to what I've been saying since September and your images need to be fit for purpose. There's no point in doing all kinds of interviews and snazzy research and planning if you are being lazy in your construction because it will ultimately leave you with your main mark out of 60 being a 20 and even if your R&P is full marks you will only end up with an E! Think about it and get your mise en scene sorted please.